Dude Revisited
Sunday, March 26, 2006
I'm spending part of my weekend revisiting Dude. I haven't read it in months. No kidding. Months. And I'm seeing things that make me blush. Stuff I thought I'd fixed. Random headhops. Sentences that have no business being where they are. A secondary character who is lame, lame, lame.*shudder*
No wonder Kate Duffy rejected it. Yikes.
So I'm fixing it up in anticipation of shipping it out for another round of submissions.
Still working on The Regency That Wouldn't Die. I can't settle on a title I like. The current one is A Dark and Stormy Knight. Except he's a baron. pfft. Details, schmetails.
Speaking of details, did I mention that Dude is now called Not Quite Dead? Yeah. It's still kind of blah, but a laugh-out-loud title isn't in my top 10 considerations right now. Getting rid of the crappy parts of it is.